Monday, 11 May 2020

trip to leaflied

On Wednesday we went to leaflied.we got to leaflied at 9:00 then we went to bed.The next day we played golf then we did some painting. After that we went to the neighbour's to have a shower the next day I played golf and ate walnuts. They were yummy.then we went home and we had MacDonald for dinner it was Really yummy.
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  1. Anonymous12 May 2020 at 08:51

    This looks good, Rowan. Have a look at the comments I made on your google doc copy of this story, then apply the changes here too.
    Can you tell us about how your felt about the things you did; did you enjoy the golf? Who won? Why did you need to go to the neighbour's for a shower?

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  2. Anonymous19 June 2020 at 11:16

    Hi James here from Matawai School. Where is Leaflied? We have a walnut tree at home. This year it produced a monster load of walnuts and Dad picked up every single one. My brother loves playing golf and we now have a golf course in our paddock on our farm. I like how you described the McDonald's.

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  3. Anonymous22 June 2020 at 12:51

    leefield is in Amberley and walnuts were yummy

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